Thursday, July 29, 2021

Wizard First Draft Page 2

 



I'm using Richie in the extreme foreground here to show that he is closer to the readers than Hilda.


Anyway, one of the other changes here as opposed to the first book is that Hilda doesn't get as much screentime here as she did in the original book.  I do plan to change that in future Hilda & Richie books; scripts and story treatments already exist for that.  But that's a whole other story for another day.

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