Second Draft Page 19

 

Hilda keeps blowing and blowing...

She's blowing a very big bubble.  I wonder what will happen if she keeps on blowing.

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Second Draft Page 18

 Sometimes...

Sometimes, it is best to leave out the words and let the pictures do the talking.

Richie blows and Hilda blows, each one trying to make a bigger bubble than the other.  The suspense is killing me.

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Second Draft Page 17

 Onto our next page!

This was fun to draw.  Hilda and Richie decide to have a duel to see who can blow a bigger bubble gum bubble.  I love the staring match I gave them there.  

It's on!

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Second Draft Page 15 and 16

 We are back with more updates!  Onto the next pages!

This page is all text but for the later draft and the final cut, I was told to forgo this.  A picture book needs to have it text and its pictures work together in order to achieve maximum effect, not unlike its brother medium of comics.

This drawing is one I'm proud of.  Both foxes are eager to see who can blow a bigger bubble.  This also further established Hilda's character; while technically an adult, she has her sense of fun as she is eager to demonstrate how good of a bubble blower she can be.

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